Fangala the Flying Feline

Woohoo! I love wolf stories. This is a beautiful piece, and I really can't see anything wrong with it. My only complaint is the italics. Don't get me wrong; I ...

Great start! Um...could there possibly be more to this? You really pulled me in, but I wanted to keep reading. Aside from the shortness, there's nothing wrong. You have vivid ...

Lovely. And by the way, I love your avatar. :D So you normally write rhyming poetry, huh? Great, me too. I love rhymes. And believe it or not, but this ...

Hi, Pawprint! I always love reading your work, and I'm glad you have a longer chapter with a title. :D I really enjoyed this. However, something doesn't work for me ...

Heehee! Thanks for the critiques, guys. I never realized it was rushed, but I'll take your word for it, since I know I have issues with rushing. And yeah, I ...

Hi, Ayra! Wow, it's great to know so much about you. It's also really brave to post all that on the internet. If I put up all that personal information, ...

Wow! First off, let me say that you have some grammar issues, and some of your rhymes seem forced, but the emotion makes up for that. I'm glad that you ...

Aw, I love this! This poem brings up wonderful memories for me. Not only that--it's beautifully written. I think you do free verse quite nicely (I'm normally a rhyming person.) ...

Do you honestly think I take this story seriously? :D It's supposed to be corny, hence the ridiculous title. Thank you for the comments, and I see your point. I ...

I'll bet a million dollars that you've read Maximum Ride. If so, I can tell. You have some serious James Patterson going on in your writing, and, quite frankly...I LOVE ...

Woohoo! Wolves! My God, I'm such a wolf person. Have you read The Sight? That's what this reminded me of. I loved this because I have such a clear picture ...

Hi! I saw that nobody had reviewed this yet, and I was like, BWAHAHA, I get to be first! :D I really liked this. It almost made me laugh, because ...

Wow. Interesting poem. Overall, I thought it was nice, but it seemed a little choppy and repetitive. The wind in the willows She sits and waits for a song to ...

Sitting in the pink plastic box, her luminous, heart-filled eyes stared at me from under painted lashes. I followed her too-big head down her seamless body to her rump with ...

Oh, yay, Ayra--your first poem! I have to agree with everybody else, but I think that this is stunning for your first poem. (You don't want to see my first ...